Saturday, December 4, 2010

9 to 5 - A Film Analysis

The movie 9 to 5, a comedy written and directed by Colin Higgins, is about three working women, Violet Newstead, Doralee Rhodes, and Judy Bernly who are all struggling in their own way to be successful in life.  Each of the women has different obstacles to overcome.  For instance, Violet is a widowed mother of four, Doralee is a married secretary who receives no respect, and Judy is a new divorcee with little work experience.  They have little in common with each other except that they each share a workplace that holds them back from developing their talents.  
Although 9 to 5 takes place in the 1980’s and is a parody of the issues facing women in the workplace, today’s woman can relate to the characters in the movie by experiencing some of the same barriers of gender inequality.  While outright sexual harassment has been greatly reduced, women still face obstacles regarding equal pay, equal respect, and family-friendly policies, like the lack of in-house childcare and flexible hours that continue to make balancing women’s personal and professional lives difficult. 
Violet, a senior supervisor at the company with nearly 12 years experience, continues to be overlooked for promotion because her boss refuses to hire a woman to do what he believes is a man’s job.  She has many ideas on how to make the workplace a better and more efficient environment for the employees; however, instead of being listened to, her boss, Frank Hart, takes her ideas and claims them as his own.  The movie takes an interesting turn when the clever ladies kidnap their boss, change office policies and revolutionize their workplace. 
The workplace setting in 9 to 5 is portrayed as a bland and cold environment; the office color palette is gray from top to bottom.  The message being sent to the workers is to show no personality, creativity, or compassion for the women working there.  Employees are not allowed to work part-time, have any personal items on their desks, and women are not paid equally to men.   Mr. Hart makes his opinion clear about the place women hold in the office when he refers to working women as “his girls.” 
Violet trained Frank Hart, along with the man for whom she was passed up for promotion.  When Mr. Hart lists the reasons why Violet is passed up for promotion, he states that “Clients would rather deal with men.”  Violet realizes that she will never gain a foot up at the company with Frank Hart steering the course.  Even worse, when Violet suggests a new color-coding policy for files in the office, Frank Hart told her that the idea needed more work, then secretly gave it to his boss and claimed the new idea as his own.
 After the ladies kidnap Mr. Hart and fake his presence at the office by signing documents directed to him, they implemented policy changes that showed a 20 percent rise in productivity and greatly increased office moral.  Some of these policies consisted of job sharing, flexible hours, part-time work, in-house childcare, and equal pay.  The office was also painted a bright yellow, color was introduced all over the office to improve mood, and personal items like plants and family pictures were allowed on the employees desks.  Violet and her cohorts even put into action a rehabilitation program for employees with alcohol problems.  The whole atmosphere changed from cold and dark, to bright and cheerful.  The employees could not be happier and the policies effectively cut down on absenteeism.  Even the Chairman of the Board came to reward Frank Hart, who happened to return to the office just in time to be sent to Brazil for his ability to turn things around for the company. 
Vincent Canby, in his review in the New York Times, describes Violet, Judy and Doralee as “office revolutionaries” (para. 2), and rightfully so.  The women completely transformed their workplace into a positive environment and changed the lives of women in the process; something Frank Hart did not care to do.
Even though 9 to 5 is a comedy and most of the movie is an unrealistic dramatization of workplace dynamics, the director does touch on issues that working women in the twenty-first century can relate to.   Higgins’ underlying message that women somehow need to be revolutionary in order to create and see real change rings true to the heartstrings of the American woman.  The ability to juggle all of the roles in life seems to be what women have to do to try to compete in the work world.  Women cook, clean and take care of their children all before they go to work and return to repeat the process (Gilbert 12).  If husbands and partners would see these household responsibilities as equal, women would be more likely to not only survive in the workplace, but flourish.          
Almost 20 years after this movie was made, American women still struggle with gender inequality issues.  Even now women battle with balancing their jobs and their many responsibilities at home.  Boise Weekly’s Carissa Wolf agrees that “we still have the same workplace issues we had 20 years ago…noting the wage disparities, the under-representation of women in high-paying professions, and the number of companies that have yet to enact woman-and-family-friendly policies, such as in-house childcare” (para. 33).  Women have yet to gain enough quality support from society, their families, and their workplace.  A revolution is needed to change society’s view of women’s roles and their many demands.  Women are unable to have it all without proper support.  Now is the time for change.  Change starts at home by husbands and partners helping out to balance a woman’s responsibilities, in the workplace by implementing policies like in-house childcare and flexible hours that will ease the workload, and in the mind-set of our society by recognizing equality and the change that needs to take place.  America is not living under Frank Hart’s thumb any longer and we need to take advantage of the talented Violets that can revolutionize the workplace.     

Works Cited
Canby, Vincent. “Nine to Five, Office Comedy.” Rev. of 9 to 5, by Colin Higgins. The New York Times 19 Dec. 1980: Para. 2. Web.
            Gilbert, Neil. “FAMILY LIFE: SOLD ON WORK.” Society 42.3 (2005):  12-17. Academic      Search Complete. EBSCO. Web. 22 Set. 2010.
Wolf, Carissa. “We’ve Come a Long Way Baby- Or Have We? The State of Feminism in Idaho. Is Feminism Dead?” Boise Weekly. (2010) Web. 18 Sept. 2010.
9 to 5. Dir. Colin Higgins. Perf. Lily Tomlin, Dolly Parton, Jane Fonda, Dabney Coleman, and Sterling Hayden. 20th Century Fox, 1980. Film.


Hope for Change



Abstract
Global gender equality is suffering, especially in Afghanistan.  The women of this war-torn country are in desperate need of basic human rights and the world must answer their cries.  Included in this essay is a glimpse into the lives of the women in Afghanistan and the abuse and issues that they face.  I not only hope to shed some much needed light upon these women, but to also make case for why they need our help.  Gender equality in Afghanistan cannot happen without the world putting pressure on the deep-seated values of its country.  The time for change is now so the women of Afghanistan can stand a chance for not only freedom, but survival.    

           
For most women in Afghanistan, life is full of fear, pain and dread.  For decades, the war-torn country of Afghanistan has seen more than its fair share of civil war, poverty and drought, making it a prime place for crime and terror to run free with no consequence.  Home to over 23 million people, Afghanistan is one of the poorest countries in the world and one of the highest illiteracy and maternal and child mortality rates on the planet.  (Annan par. 2) 
Women have borne the brunt of the country’s turmoil for years and have seen violence, mutilation and rape to themselves and their children.  They have been given little respect or dignity and continue to struggle with basic civil and human rights.  As Belquis Ahmadi so eloquently said, “Afghan women have lost lives, family members, basic human rights, human dignity and the right to be respected.  Soon they might lose something that destroys humanity.  They might lose hope.” (as qtd. in TIME Magazine par. 1)  While women in America are struggling to attain an equal standing in the workplace and balance their personal and professional lives, the women of Afghanistan are silently fighting an entirely different battle; the basic right of freedom.  For gender equality to ever exist in Afghanistan, the world must stand up to fight terror so the women of its country are protected and empowered to pursue the education, health care and political voice they so desperately deserve.        
Life for the Afghan woman changed dramatically with the emergence of the Taliban.  From 1996 to 2001, this political group greatly worsened the treatment of women, making it a strict law that women could no longer work, find medical care or receive education.  The Taliban enacted laws that took away all women’s rights and personal power.  They were no longer able to leave their house without being completely covered with a traditional burqa, and could only leave if they were supervised by a family male escort.  Abdullah Qazi, in The Plight of the Afghan Woman, explains further that “women who were doctors and teachers before, suddenly were forced to be beggars and even prostitutes in order to feed their families.”  (par. 1)  The Taliban took away every freedom, making the women of Afghanistan powerless and degraded.
There are many women who suffered a worse fate, being tortured and brutally disfigured by their husbands and fathers.  Atia Abawi explained that “the United Nations estimates that nearly 90 percent of Afghanistan's women face some sort of domestic abuse.” (par. 14)  It is not uncommon for husbands to cut off a woman’s ears and nose as punishment for what they saw as a crime or wrong doing.  Bibi Aisha, a 19-year-old married Afghan woman, suffered that fate from her husband after she tried to run away from the abuse.  She was returned to her husband by her father-in-law after fleeing her home, only to be mutilated and left for dead in the mountains.  Without any power left, the only way Afghan women felt they could make their voices heard was to do the only thing they could to take control and that was how they treat their own bodies.  As a way to break away from their abusers, many women began burning themselves with simple cooking oil.  Lee Marzel reports that women “deliberately set fire to themselves in order to escape a life of domestic torture and abuse.”  (par. 2)  It is devastating that many women do not suffer death after setting themselves on fire, but endure many months of painful treatment and surgeries to survive.  
Even though the short reign of the Taliban has ended, the superior attitude of the male population lingers and women are still afraid.  Only recently, women are starting to venture out and regain their place in society.  Women are slowly returning back to work and are helping with the little economic growth that Afghanistan is seeing today.  Without women working and contributing to society, the country is bound to stay in a depressed state with excessive poverty.  If all members of a society can contribute their talents and strengths, the world will see a better community with everyone pulling together.  If half the population is weighting down the society and is not allowed to support progress, there will be little hope for change.  
There are many women’s groups and organizations trying to institute change and support the women in Afghanistan, such as the Revolutionary of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) and Afghans for Civil Society.   The Asia Foundation is one of those groups that continually maintain a presence in Afghanistan.  The organization conducted a survey in 2010 where they interviewed 6,467 Afghan citizens “on security, development, economy, government, corruption, and women's issues to assess the mood and direction of the country.” (Afghanistan in 2010, par. 1)  As seen in the graph below, many Afghans view education and illiteracy as the number one problem facing Afghan women, along with lack of job opportunities and rights coming in second and third.














  The Asia Foundation 2010

However hopeful the citizens of Afghanistan might be, Afghan women are continuing to see the backlash of the large part of society that is unwilling to change.  Taliban laws are continuing to be implemented in rural areas where the torture of women is outside of police legislation.  Even in areas where police are supposed to enforce the laws of the country, many of these men and their crimes are going unpunished because of corruption.  The United States military is also planning on leaving the country and will no longer have a presence in Afghanistan.  Life for the Afghan woman could potentially go back to being ruled by the Taliban.      
Right now the only thing that Afghanistan can offer its women and children is the hope for change and that this violence and terror will someday end.  The world community needs to put pressure on the societies that degrade their women and limit their futures.   No longer can we turn a blind eye to the women of Afghanistan and the torture that they face.  Countries must stand up and take a place to protect her, helping not only the women of Afghanistan, but also safety throughout the world.  The women of this country are the key to the reconstruction of Afghanistan and must be allowed to take a stand if peace is to ever be achieved in this violent nation.   Hillary Clinton commented that “A post-Taliban Afghanistan where women’s rights are respected is much less likely to harbor terrorists in the future…a society that values all its members, including women, is also likely to put a higher premium on life, opportunity and freedom.”  (par. 8) 
Hope has to remain in our hearts that the women of Afghanistan will someday be free and able to live their lives without fear.  Until that happens, the world must remain diligent and not tolerate terrorism or the horrible abuse that goes along with it.   Women especially who live in countries where freedom and equality are alive, must stand up and be the voice for the women of Afghanistan.  The time is now for the women of this war-torn country to have the freedom that all humans born in this world deserve.  It is their right and citizens of the world should not stop until they have that freedom.      

Works Cited

Abawi, Atia. “Afghan Woman whose Nose, Ears Cut Off Travels to U.S.” CNN (2010):1-2. Web. 27 Nov. 2010.
Annan, Kofi. “The Situation of Women in Afghanistan.” Women’s Summit for Democracy (2001) : 1-6. Web. 16 Nov. 2010.
Ayubi, Najla. “Women’s Biggest Problems in Afghanistan.” The Asia Foundation (2010): 1. Web. 1 Dec. 2010
Clinton, Hillary, Belquis, Ahmadi. “New Hope for Afghanistan’s Women.” TIME Magazine (2001): 1-3. Web. 16 Nov. 2010.
Marzel, Lee. “Afghan Women Burn Themselves to Flee Abuse.” RAWA.org (2009):1-4. Web. 16 Nov. 2010.
Qazi, Abdullah. “The Plight of the Afghan Woman.” Afghanistan Online (2010):1-2. Web 27 Nov. 2010.
Rawa. “Rawa’s Standpoints.” Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (2010):1 Web 21 Nov. 2010.
Zulfacar, Maliha. "The pendulum of gender politics in Afghanistan." Central Asian Survey   25.1/2 (2006): 27-59. Academic Search Complete. EBSCO. Web. 26 Nov. 2010.


My Reflection

Starting out in English 102, I had very little faith in my writing skills.  I lacked the self confidence to believe that I could pass the class.  It has been over ten years since I have attended college.  I spent most of my time in those past years running a business, raising two beautiful children and finding my true passion; working with animals.  My main reason for returning to school is to finish what I started, something I have always regretted not doing when I was young.  Not having a degree has always bothered me and I am finally in a place where I can attain my dream. 
When I first made the decision to return to school, I didn’t realize how much I would learn about myself.  I did not know that I had it in me to grow as much as I did.  Looking back on my experience, my growth as a writer, as a student and as a person has changed the view I have on myself.  I now know that I am capable of accomplishing anything I set my mind to.  I believe this will not only help me in the future, but will also help the way I live my life and the way I raise my children.  I am no longer afraid that I am not good enough, because I know that I am.
When first choosing my topic for the semester, I must admit that I knew nothing about the gender inequality that not only faced the women in America, but also the horrible oppression that the women of Afghanistan endure on a daily basis.  In my research, I learned so much about the deplorable conditions and the unfair treatment that no woman should ever have to bear.  The women in America, even though they have their own struggles, know nothing of suffering compared to these women.  This treatment truly opened my eyes to this world and made me grateful for the life I have.    My writing drastically improved when I became passionate about my subject.  My first essay on American women was very hard for me because I lacked the passion that was created when I researched Afghanistan’s treatment. 
I not only lacked passion, but I also lacked the understanding of how to properly write an essay.  I learned, with the help of my instructor and tutors, the structure of an essay and in that learning, clarity arrived.  Everything came together and writing became less of a struggle and more of an expression of who I was.  Who I wanted to be became an attainable reality.  I have always had a gift to share a different point of view than others and being able to clearly communicate my view is something that I have always wanted.  My writing skills have improved so much that I am now able to speak clearly and eloquently.  I went from having no self-confidence, to the humble reality that I have something to offer.  I lack the words to tell my reader what that means to me.  My whole life has been turned upside down and I am now not only a better writer, but a better mother, friend and wife.  The world has new light and I will be forever thankful for the experience this class has afforded me.    


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9 to 5. Dir. Colin Higgins. Perf. Lily Tomlin, Dolly Parton, Jane Fonda, Dabney Coleman, and Sterling Hayden. 20th Century Fox, 1980. Film.